How Do I Know If My College Application is Ready To Submit?

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Your application is just about ready to go. But you want to make sure that it’s going to have the right impact! That it’s going to be noticed! What do you do?

I often have my students channel their inner-artist when reviewing each application for admission — even the non-artsy types! What I mean by that is to think about each aspect of your application like a piece of art in a portfolio. Artists talk about cohesion in their work, so should you.

Most college admission officers spend about 10-minutes reviewing an application. That’s it! They rarely look at a piece of the application more than once; one read of the essay, one glance at a resume. One of the biggest mistakes that an applicant can make is to confuse your reader. It’s like putting a DaVinci next to a Warhol!

So, as you review your application (or have someone else take a look), ask yourself the following:

• Do all of my essays sound like they are written by the same person?

  • Often, in an attempt to be varied and engaging, students try to be something that they are not, and that shows in their writing style and their tone.

• Am I being consistent with my activities?

  • Did you list theatre as your top extracurricular activity but write an essay about football?

• Does the intended major that I listed make sense for your activities, transcript, etc.?

  • This can lead to a lot of confusion for an AO!

• Am I being repetitive?

  • You wouldn’t want to look at the same still life over and over again!!

• Does my application make sense for that college?

  • They’re not all the same!

• Is the real me expressed on the page?

The last is the most important one! Your point of view and how you see the world should jump off the page, whether you are a sculptor or a scientist!

Good luck!

Can I Use One Essay for All of My Applications?

Myth: I only have to write one essay! All my colleges are on the Common App!

Reality: Many colleges who accept the Common Application require supplemental essays, often including one that prompts, “Why us?” In essence, colleges are asking you to write about what makes you a great fit for their institution and what makes them a great fit for you.  Or they ask you to write additional required essays that still need to be well-crafted and thoughtful.  As we always say, don’t wait until the last minute to investigate what each school requires and plan your time accordingly!

Are the College Essay Examples Online Good?

NO PEEKING!

Every year toward the end of the summer, the New York Times publishes sample college essays.  I assume that they are looking to inspire rising seniors to begin writing their college essays if they haven’t already started; maybe reading others’ work provides a nudge to get going.  Other colleges, like Tufts University, Johns Hopkins, and Connecticut College, post essays on their websites from prior application cycles that they have found especially compelling.  Honestly, if you were to google “sample college essays,” you would probably find an endless supply of personal stories at your fingertips.  Why not take a look for inspiration?  

 What we have discovered is the very act of reading other essays for inspiration often inhibits a student’s creativity.  They consciously or subconsciously replicate what they have seen.  It isn’t that they are necessarily copying an idea or plagiarizing text, but they tend to fit their idea into a structure, format, or theme that they have already read.  After all, we are often patternmakers.  Once we see something, we cannot unsee it.  In the admissions process, the last thing you want to be is a carbon copy of anyone else.  So, I encourage you to trust your own creativity and turn a blind eye to the “essay that worked.”  

HELP, Typo in my Common App!!

Q: I submitted my Common Application a few weeks ago. When I looked back at it again, I noticed a typo in my activities. What do I do?

A: A college representative was visiting our office a few weeks ago, and we asked the same question of her. "Students need to realize that we are human, too! We are far more understanding than they think!"

Mistakes happen all the time! 

So, what should you do if you discover an error in an application that has already been submitted? If it absolutely needs to be corrected, such as an incorrect essay version or a glaring typo, the student should call the school and ask what their policy is for correcting the mistake. Often, the college will have the student email the change to the general admission email -- an admission staff member can then make the adjustment on their end, sometimes even before the file has been reviewed. If the error is more of an oops than egregious, it can be a harder call. Sometimes, it is better just to let it go. Pointing out the error may draw more attention to it, which could be a bad thing.

"I totally get it! These kids are juggling so much," said the rep. "Even calling us the wrong name in a supplement, I'll let go if the rest of the application is strong."

The Best College Essay Advice You'll Get!

At this time of the year, we often get calls from rising seniors asking for a bit of advice on their essay. “My topic is great, but something is missing.” After an initial read, we concur. What is missing? Them!

The best college essays are rarely the ones with the most “impressive” or “catchy” topic because the topic of every single college essay should be the same: you!

Making that shift away from the life-changer or the dramatic event can make all the difference. When you see yourself as the topic of the essay, you have far more freedom with themes. What small story showcases who you are at your core? How do you think? What are your quirks? Your fears? Your dreams?

Use that story!

NEW Common App Essay Prompts for 2023-24

Get brainstorming…

The Common Application just announced the essay prompts for the upcoming admission cycle. Good news! They are remaining the same as 2022-23!

Below is the full list of prompts for 2023-2024.

• Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

• The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

• Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?

• Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?

• Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

• Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?

• Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.

  In addition, the optional COVID-19 impact question will remain.

HELP, Typo in my Common App!!

Q: I submitted my Common Application a few weeks ago. When I looked back at it again, I noticed a typo in my activities. What do I do?

A: A college representative was visiting our office a few weeks ago, and we asked the same question of her. "Students need to realize that we are human too! We are far more understanding than they think!"

Mistakes happen all the time! 

So, what should you do if you discover an error in an application that has already been submitted? If it absolutely needs to be corrected, such as an incorrect essay version or a glaring typo, the student should call the school and ask what their policy is for correcting the mistake. Often, the college will have the student email the change to the general admission email -- an admission staff member can then make the adjustment on their end, sometimes even before the file has been reviewed. If the error is more of an oops than egregious, it can be a harder call. Sometimes, it is better just to let it go. Pointing out the error may draw more attention to it, which could be a bad thing.

"I totally get it! These kids are juggling so much," said the rep. "Even calling us the wrong name in a supplement, I'll let go if the rest of the application is strong."

Admission officers review an application in under ten minutes! So take a deep breath and relax! Most of the time, they won’t even notice!

NEW Common App Essay Prompts for 2021-2022

Get writing…

The Common Application just announced the essay prompts for the upcoming admission cycle. One prompt has been replaced, but the other six remain the same.

The new prompt is: Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?

Below is the full list of prompts for 2021-2022.

Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

• The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

• Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?

• Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?

• Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

• Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?

• Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.In addition, the optional COVID-19 impact question will remain.

College Essays... No Peeking!

Every year toward the end of the summer, the New York Times publishes sample college essays.  I assume that they are looking to inspire rising seniors to begin writing their college essays if they haven’t already started; maybe reading others’ work provides a nudge to get going.  Other colleges, like Tufts University, Johns Hopkins, and Connecticut College, post essays on their websites from prior application cycles that they have found especially compelling.  Honestly, if you were to google “sample college essays,” you would probably find an endless supply of personal stories at your fingertips.  Why not take a look for inspiration?  

 What we have discovered is the very act of reading other essays for inspiration often inhibits a student’s creativity.  They consciously or subconsciously replicate what they have seen.  It isn’t that they are necessarily copying an idea or plagiarizing text, but they tend to fit their idea into a structure, format, or theme that they have already read.  After all, we are often patternmakers.  Once we see something, we cannot unsee it.  In the admissions process, the last thing you want to be is a carbon copy of anyone else.  So, I encourage you to trust your own creativity and turn a blind eye to the “essay that worked.”  

College Admissions Offices Spot-Checking Applications

We’ve all heard the adage, “Honesty is the best policy.” However, in the competitive landscape of college admissions, some students may feel pressure to embellish their resumes or the activities sections of their applications in an attempt to gain acceptance to their top-choice colleges.  Beware!  In response to Varsity Blues, some colleges have started to spot-check applications, verifying that students’ activities and involvement in activities are accurate.  When you submit an application, you affirm that the information you provide to the colleges is “your own work, factually true and honestly presented.”  This quote is taken directly from the Common Application, but the other application platforms, Coalition Application, and college-specific applications have similar statements that you must agree to before submitting your application.  

Colleges are cracking down, indicating that they will likely revoke offers of admission to students who are found in violation of this affirmation.  So, avoid the temptation to present yourself as captain if you were a co-captain or list a club if you have never attended a meeting.  Being your authentic self is essential.  That way, when your acceptance letters arrive, you can rest assured that your achievements were earned not fabricated.